I disassembled and cleaned my laptop, and I had an interesting walk in the evening
Yesterday, I promised myself that I would disassemble and clean my laptop. So after finishing my morning routine, I immediately started the cleaning process. First, I disassembled the main components. I unscrewed the back cover and removed the cooling fans. While doing this, I realized something important about the thermal pads. Since I didn’t have replacement thermal pads, I couldn’t fully disassemble the entire cooling system. Originally, I hadn’t even planned to go that far — the idea was quite spontaneous.
To be honest, my initial plan was just to remove the back cover and blow the dust out with compressed air. However, once I opened it, I saw how dusty the internal components were. Because of that, I decided to clean each part carefully and disassemble as many components as possible. The whole process took around two hours, and I finished it successfully. Now my laptop is working much better than before, and the fans are spinning less. I also took photos before cleaning — you can clearly see how dusty the laptop was.
During my day, I watched the second part of Harry Potter. I also listened to and watched English podcasts on YouTube, and I continued working on my blog. I still can’t finish all the work because the scope of the project is huge, and I want to develop it properly, securely, and without any rush. I think this is the most important thing for me.
The weather in Tatarstan was not very good. A blizzard covered the entire republic, and it snowed non-stop all day. Right now, all pedestrian paths are covered with snow, and using them is extremely challenging. The roads were also covered, but road maintenance services managed to clean them partially.
My evening was pretty interesting because I wore my real winter parka and went for a walk. As usual, I walked around my favorite places. I visited the embankment, Sabantuy Park, and the city center. During my walk, I saw a fox on my way to the park. It ran away from me, so I was safe. I also recorded a video on my GoPro and I’m thinking about publishing it on YouTube. However, I’m not sure yet, because the video quality might be lower than expected. I still haven’t checked it.
The embankment was a bit loud because some people were setting off firecrackers. Apart from that, everything was quiet, as usual. The city center was also rather calm. People were sitting in their cars and watching me as I walked through the blizzard and recorded a video. Overall, my evening walk was comfortable, interesting, and enjoyable.
Yesterday I promised to myself to disassemble and clean my laptop. So after my morning routine I immediately started clean processes. First I disassemblead main components. Unscrewed back frame and removed air coolers. After it I figured out one important thing about thermal pads. Because I didn't have thermal pads for change. Therefore I couldn't disassemble the whole cooler system. But I didn't want to disassemble those parts early. And it was just spontaneous ideas during my cleaning process. Honestly, I just wanted to unscrew the back frame and blow with compressed air. However when I opened back frame I saw so many dusty components inside. So I decided blew each component properly and desamble some possible components. For it I spent around two hours and finished it successfully. Now my laptop is working more better than earlier. And air coolers started spin more less. I also attached photos before cleaning, you can see how my laptop was dusty.
During my day I watched seconde part of Harry Potter. Listened to and watched english podcasts on YouTube. And I continued work in my blog. While I can't finish all works, because the scope of works so huge and I want to develop it properly, securely, without any rushes. I think it's most important for me. Also the weather in Tatarstan was not enough good. The blizzard covered whole republic, and the snow went without non-stop all day. Right now all pedestrian walks are covered with snow. Use pdestrain walks will be extremely challenging. The roads were also covered with snow, but road services partially cleaned it.
My evening was pretty interesting. Because I wear my real winter parks and went for a walk. As usual I walked around my favorite places. I visited the embankment, park "Sabantuy" and city center. During my walk I saw fox, on my path toward to park. It escaped from me, so I was in safety. I also took a video on my GoPro and I want to publish it in YouTube. However I'm not shure. Because the video quality can be more low. Right now I still didn't check it. The embankment was a bit loudly. There some people who exploded the firecrackers. Everything was, as usual quiet. The city center also was a bit quiet. Everyone just sat inside the cars and watching me. How I walked around the blizzard and recorded a video. Generally my evening walk was pretty good, comfortable, and interesting.
Overall
- Your text is understandable, but it sounds a bit raw and repetitive.
Main issues:
- Verb tenses (past simple vs. past continuous)
- Articles (a, the)
- Word choice (disassemble / dismantle / blow / spin)
- Sentence flow (some sentences are too long or slightly confusing)
That’s normal — this is exactly how progress looks.
2. Common mistakes & corrections
- “I promised to myself” → “I promised myself” (no to)
- “clean processes upon my laptop” → “cleaning process on my laptop”
- “disamblead” / “desamble” → “disassembled” (spelling)
- “blew with compressed air” → “blew it out with compressed air”
- “working more better” → “working much better”
- “air coolers started spin more less” → “the fans started spinning less”
- seconde part → second part
- english podcasts → English podcasts
- the scale of works so huge → the scope of the work is so huge
- without any rushes → without any rush
- I wear my real winter parks → I wore my real winter parka
- the snow went without non-stop → it snowed non-stop
- I still didn't check it → I still haven’t checked it
- road services → road maintenance services
- use pedestrian walks → using pedestrian paths
- everyone just sat inside the cars → people were sitting in their cars
These changes make your English sound natural, not just correct.