I’ve been continuing my trip to the village
Today I had a very scary dream and woke up at 3 AM. At that time, I felt a bit sick. I had a headache and was a little sweaty. At the same time, the temperature at home felt quite high. Because of that, I couldn’t fall asleep for some time. However, I had already started to feel the headache around 11 PM, and apparently it continued until 3 AM. I’m sure of that.
In the morning, when I woke up, I felt 100% healthy. I didn’t have a headache anymore and I wasn’t sweating; I felt comfortable. So I did my morning routine and went to the village. There, I had some tasks to do with my uncle. I had also promised to show what I bought yesterday, but I decided not to show everything. It was just some plumbing tools. I delivered them and explained everything to my uncle. After that, he will be able to install them himself.
However, I had another task. It was related to meat. We had to cut and chop large pieces of frozen meat. It wasn’t difficult because we used a special cutting tool and an axe for chopping, but it took quite a lot of time. During the first part of the day, we cut one portion and chopped it into small pieces. In the second part of the day, we finished the next portion. Honestly, the second part was easier than the first because we worked with bigger pieces and finished them faster. After that, I was invited to go to the bathhouse.
While I was at the bathhouse, my uncle and his wife finished the work. They chopped all the meat into small pieces properly. When I came out, they had already drunk tea and eaten some sweets. I heard them come into the house and talk about different things. After that, I was also invited to sit at the table and drink tea, but I chose to drink water with lemon and eat some sweets instead.
Closer to the evening, around 4 PM, I left the village and arrived home. In the evening, I finished Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince and downloaded the last two parts, Deathly Hallows Parts 1 and 2. I plan to watch them tomorrow. Overall, my evening was for rest and enjoyment. I finished the day by walking around my favorite places and, of course, watching Good Morning America, because I missed it during my morning routine.
Today I had a very scary dream and woke up at 3 AM. That time I felt myself a bit sick. I had a headache, and I was a little bit sweaty. At the same time I felt the temperature in the home was high. Therefore I couldn't fall asleep some time. However, I already started felt the headache at 11 PM. Apparently it continued until 3 AM, I'm sure.
In the morning when I woke up I felt myself 100% healthy. I haven't headache and didn't sweat, I felt myself comfortable. So I did my morning routine and went to the village. There I had some tasks with my uncle. I also promised, show what I bought yesterday. But I decided don't share everything. It was just a plumbing tools. I just delivered it and conveyed to my uncle. Next, he yourself will be able to install it.
However, I had my next task. It was related with meat. We should to cut and chop the whole pieces of the frozen meat. It was not difficult, because we used special tool for cutting and axe for chop. But it took enough time. First part of the day, we cut one part and crushed it into small pieces. In the second part of day we finished next part. Honestly, second part was more easier than the first. Because we started and finished big pieces of the meat. Then I was invited to take a bathhouse.
While I took a bathhouse, uncle and his wife finished the work. They crushed all the pieces into small pieces properly. And when I came out from the bathhouse they already drunk the tea and eaten some goodies. But I heard how they entered in home and talked about anything else. After I also was invited behind the table to drink the tea. But I drank water with lemons and ate some goodies.
Closer to the evening, around 4 PM, I left the village and arrived at home. In the evening I finished Half-Blood Prince of Harry Potter. And downloaded last second parts, Deathly Hallows parts 1-2. I plan to watch these episodes tomorrow. Overall, my evening was just for rest and enjoy. I finished this day by walking around my favorite places. And of course with my show "Good Morning America". Because I missed it during my morning routine.
- “felt myself” → “felt” In English, we don’t say felt myself.
- Wrong verb forms: started felt, should to cut, decided don’t share → infinitives and past tense need fixing.
- Articles missing: in home, took a bathhouse → should be at home, went to the bathhouse.
- Some unnatural phrases: crushed meat, ext about my day → understandable, but not natural English.
- Your storytelling is good and the timeline is clear
- Vocabulary is decent; structure is logical