I lost my heating system while it was –21 degrees outside
Yesterday, I checked my teeth again. I tried using my manual toothbrush instead of the electric one, and I didn’t see any changes. As usual, I saw the same stained areas between my teeth. Maybe it was even a bit worse. In general, I couldn’t find any improvement. Now I have doubts about why I bought that electric toothbrush if it cleans my teeth almost the same as a manual toothbrush. Another point is that I probably used the liquid incorrectly. So today or in the next few days, I need to test it before brushing my teeth. Then I’ll be 100 percent sure whether I used it correctly or not. As for the surgically treated area in my upper gum, I can still feel the stitches, but everything is fine. There is no pain and no discomfort. When I rinse my mouth with chlorhexidine, I don’t feel anything disturbing.
Today the weather was cloudy, without snow. The temperature was around –21 degrees, and it was really cold. In the morning and during the day, the temperature was about –12 degrees, if I remember correctly. Toward the evening, the temperature went down, so I decided to skip my evening walk and stay at home.
During the day, I worked and participated in a Google Meet with our CEO. It lasted more than an hour, starting at 11 a.m. and finishing at 12:15 p.m. Everything was as usual, without any issues. I said a few words about my tasks and then just listened. In short, it felt like a mini vacation for me.
Around 5 p.m., a technician arrived to check our heating system and fix the hot water. Over the last few days, I had started to notice that the water wasn’t warm enough. However, the heating system itself was working fine, and I didn’t have any complaints. Unfortunately, something went wrong. After cleaning the heating system, a hole was discovered near an important component. That part needs to be replaced, but it couldn’t be done today because the technician didn’t have the replacement available. As a result, the heating system can’t be turned on.
P.S I’ve also attached my original text without any fixes below in the comments
Yesterday I checked my teeth again. Because I tried use my classic toothbrush instead electric. And I didn't see any changes. As usual between teeth I saw the same painted parts. Maybe it was a bit worse, generally I couldn't find something. Now I have doubts about, why I bought that electric toothbrush, if it also cleans my teeth very similar with my classic toothbrush. Another one moment, probably I just used that liquide a bit wrong. So today or next days I need to test it before brushing the teeth. And I'll be sure hundred percent, about I used it correct or wrong. Also about my surgered area in my top gum. Right now I'm still feel the seems, but everything is good, no pain, no any uncomfortable feelings. When I rinse my mouth with chlorhexidine I also don't feel something to disturb me.
Today the weather was cloudy, without snow, the temperature around -21 degrees and it's really cold. But in the morning and the day the temperature was around -12 degrees, if I'm correct. And closer to evening the temperature went to down. So I decided skip my walking at evening and spent it in home.
During the day I worked and participated in our google meet wih our CEO. It continued more than hour, started at 11 AM and finished at 12:15 PM. There was everyhing as usual and without any accidents. I just told few words about my tasks and then just listened. Shortly it was mini vacation for me.
Around 5 PM arrived master to check our heating system and fix hot water. Because last days I started feel how the water was not enough warm. But heating system worked good, I don't had some complaints. However happened something bad. After cleaning the heating system a hole was discovered around the important knot. Now should to change that knot, but today it couldn't be happend. Because that thing didn't available at master and can't turn on heating.
2. Classic toothbrush
- classic toothbrush
- manual toothbrush (correct)
3. Verb tense errors
- I don’t had - I didn’t have (correct)
Rule: after did / didn’t, use the base form of the verb
4. Wrong word forms
- liquide - liquid (correct)
- seems - stitches (correct)
- master - technician / repairman (correct)
This is the natural term in English
5. Prepositions
- skip my walking - skip my walk (correct)
- spent it in home - spent it at home (correct)
6. “I’m still feel”
- I’m still feel - I still feel
Never use am/is/are with a normal verb like feel unless it’s feeling.
Overall assessment
- Clarity: 7/10
- Grammar: 5/10
- Vocabulary: 6.5/10
- Progress: very good
You are clearly improving, especially in storytelling and confidence