My observations about my dental health and my regular day
Yesterday at night, after brushing my teeth with my new electric toothbrush, I checked how clean my teeth were. For this, I used a newly bought liquid for testing dental plaque. I used cotton swabs to apply it to my teeth and then carefully rinsed my mouth. After that, I saw some places between my teeth that were painted light pink. All other places were clean; I couldn’t notice any painted areas. Now I know which places I need to spend more time cleaning. If my toothbrush can’t clean those places effectively, I will need to buy extra tools. But I think everything is okay with my toothbrush; probably I can’t use it effectively yet, and I need to learn how to use it properly. Generally, I’m very glad about these results because I thought my teeth were much dirtier. However, today I want to try my classic toothbrush and brush my teeth with it. I hope I can see the difference between an electric toothbrush and a classic toothbrush.
Today I had a regular workday without any worries. I woke up at 8:55 AM, just in time for work. I was able to greet my colleagues in our work chat because we have a strange but interesting activity. Every day until 9 AM, we send stickers or messages in the chat. This way, everyone knows each other’s status. If someone is late or not present, they just don’t send a message. Or someone can send a message and notify everyone, for example: “I’ll be late about 20 minutes, so I can’t join our meeting.” I think it’s not bad for me, and it doesn’t worry me.
During the day, I watched and listened to a video about English history. It was very long—around four hours—but I finished it in the evening after work. Also, when I was having lunch and dinner, I watched two episodes about USA farm girls. The first episode was about how they managed the farm by themselves because their parents left somewhere. The second episode was about how they bought a horse. I also found something interesting about the movie Home Alone. You should watch it too. I think it’s interesting and not very long—around five minutes.
In the evening, I started a new task from my previous work. I need to finish it today because the deadline is tomorrow morning. I hope I can finish it successfully and without any nervousness. I also went for a walk around 9 PM. I walked around the park in our city center, where a New Year tree is installed, and along the embankment. The walk was not bad. The weather was not cold, around -5 degrees. It even started snowing and has been continuing since then.
P.S I’ve also attached my original text without any fixes below in the comments
Yesterday at nigth, after teeth brush with my new electric toothbrush, I checked how clean my teeth. For it I used my newly bougth liquid for testing dental plaque. So I used cotton swabs to apply it on my teeth and then carefully rinse mouth. After I saw some places between teeth where was pained in lite pink color. All other places were clean, I couldn't notice any painted areas. Now I know what places I need to spent more time to clean. If my toothbrush can't clean that places effectively I need to buy extra things. But I hink everything ok with my toothbrush, probably I can't use it effecively and I need to learn it. Generally I'm so glad about this results, because I thougth my teeth more dirty. However today I want to try my classic toothbrush and try to brush my teeth with it. And I hope I can see differents between electrical toothbrush and classic toothbrush.
Today I had just a regular workday without any worries. I was woke up at 8:55 AM untill my work. But I could welcomed my colleagues in our workchat. Because we have some strange activities. It's about, each day untill 9 AM we send some stickers or something else in our chat. And everyone can know about each other statuses. If someone late or not present, then he just don't send message. Or someone just can send message and notified each other, "I'll be late around 20 minutes, so I can't connect to our meet" and something else. I think it's no bad for me and while it don't worried me.
During the day I watched and listened video about english history. It was so long, around four hours, but I finished it at evening, after work. Also when I having lunch and dinner I watched two episodes of that USA farm girls. First was about how they managed the farm by ourselves, because there parents left somewhere. Second, about how they bougth the horse. Also I found something interesting about movie "Home alone" you should watch it also. I think it's intersting and no so long, around five minutes.
At my evening time I started new task from my previouse work. And I need to finishe it today, because the deadline tomorrow morning. I hope I can finish it successfully and withou any nervouse. Also I went for a walk around 9 PM. I walked around the park in our city center, where installed new year tree and around our embankment. Walking was no bad, the weather not cold, around -5 deegrees. Even the snow started and have been continuing yet.
This is good intermediate-level writing. Your main goal — being clear and understandable — is already achieved. Now your focus should be:
- articles (a / the)
- verb forms
- spelling accuracy
nigth - night (correct)
bougth - bought (correct)
effecively - effectively (correct)
These are small, but frequent — slow down when writing (correct)
Articles (a / the)
This is still your weakest point.
Example:
after teeth brush - after brushing my teeth (correct)
Verb forms:
You often forget -ed or -ing:
I was woke up - I woke up (correct)
when I having lunch - when I was having lunch (correct)